Not much to say about this page. I hope my dialogue is working.
The pages I’m on now though [page 18, 19] are so much more fun to draw! because they are outside. So look forward to that.
I love drawing though. I love drawing comics. Ha ha.
P.S. I’m still investigating the case of the missing navigation buttons. Hope you guys don’t mind too much.
EDIT Oops forgot the texture! Also edited some dialogue a bit.
I’m so pleased I found your comic! The style is so insanely different from anything else I’ve read, and I love how you use it’s sketchiness to make it more expressive and impressive than many of the more ‘finely detailed’ ones. Your use of colour is fantastic, and the shadowing… I don’t think I can get past how much I love those windows. Wow.
You make everything look so effortless, and I salute you on your successful illusion. Keep it up!
(O yay outside!
It’ll be sweet!) At first read, I felt that the dialogue was to slow and messy, but I went over it again, and realized it’s actually Girl’s hesitancy. So, I think it’s working. 
Can’t wait for the next page. 
Also, the navigation buttons seem to be working for me right now. (If that helps a bit.)
Ha ha, that’s good. It’s a hard situation because I want to move things along but I a lot has happened. She’s just been lost far from home, doesn’t know if she’ll be able to get back, has no idea where she is, etc, etc. I’m trying to get into that mind set. Ha ha. So I don’t think they’d just be able to break into an instant fluid discourse.
Man, Rivers have a nasty habit of taking you ridiculously far away from home when you fall in them. haha.
Also, I think your Dialogue is working well dude, Your getting the “I have no idea were i am, were am i, i would like to know im worried” Vibe going… but i feel the transfer from thanking them for taking care of her to asking about her village seems a little choppy, Though i can see it as her being hesitant like Yksesh said above. So all in all, your doing good
And i am very excited to see the out side world! and all the strange things that may exist there! Adventure huzzah!
Ha ha thanks man. I think in further chapters it will be a lot easier to write, because it’ll be more nartural. At the beginning it’s like, “I have so many questions, which ones am I supposed to ask?” Etc. etc. So it’s hard to know what to include, what not to include.
Outside or not, this is some great work. I can’t wait til I can buy this too!
Hey, nice new website! You restarted the comic, huh? I used to read the old one on drunk duck. Good stuff.
Ah, cool! how does it compare so far?
If I have one wish, it’s that I’d like to see the speech bubbles blended more with the art style. Sort of like what Sarah E does with Dreamless? Otherwise, I really do like where this is going. The dialogue is good – it’s hard to emulate a scared child without coming off a little choppy – so you’re executing it very well!
Hmm. I see what you mean. I used to do them all by hand but it took too long, so I would end up rushing and making my handwriting illegible. Ha ha. Any suggestions specifically?
Maybe a font change?
Haha! I wish I could be more “nartural”. XD Whatever that is, lol.
and…
“I love drawing though. I love drawing comics. Ha ha.”
DAMMIT, I LOVE DRAWING TOO! It’s a good thing to not forget.
where did the village name of enka come from? any relation to the music genre or just a random word?
At the time I came up with it it was just a random word.
I later found out about the musical genre, so I’m not sure if I should keep it or not. Ha ha.
haha i only wondered because a long time ago i used “enka” for something (after making it up) and also later found out it was a musical genre after googling it.
Yeah, don’t you hate then that happens? Ha ha ha. I like the sound of the word though.