Oh, there he goes.
Today I finished thumb-nailing chapter 3. ( ´ ▽ ` ) It will be 43 pages, as it stands now. Seems like it will be an exciting chapter.
But you’ve still got like 6 pages of chapter 2 to sit through! Woop woop!
At this point now I have officially surpassed in page number the old version of Para-Ten. At this point in the old comic I was already on chapter 4… ha ha. Such short chapters.
I’d like to thank all my readers, new and old, and big thanks for everyone who has told there friends and spread the word! You guys make me pumped and want to work hard!
awww, rip guy. also whatever that thing is it is ginormous.
It’s like a rock with eyes.
There’s an old version??
*Goes and reads*
As I said before…
WHO’S GOING TO LOOK AFTER FERDANDERALD??
ISN’T IT OBVIOUS
THE SOUL MONSTER???!
Paveline, your steed is so much cooler than a pony
Yes the soul monster.
Wow, I just read from start to finish, the old Para-Ten.
Wow.
This is totally different though, and I can’t help but feel that her character is somewhat different also.
Ha ha, yeah it’s changed a lot.
I think in changing the plot I made her a little less perfect, and a little less wise. So that she could be more receptive to growth. But the original spirit of her character is still there. =] What do you think?
Though, when I first started reading this version without knowing there was an original, I was still struck by how mature her character is. She seems like someone who can get an important job done, who knows how to prioritize and keeps her cool in at least the most important places. (When she tried to hide from the monster in that night scene, consequently, I was a little surprised, though I guess you can forgive someone who’s suffered so much trauma recently.)
Maybe you can’t have a Paveline without having at least a little wisdom.
Ha ha, yeah… it’s part of her character I s’pose. She’s just a thoughtful young lady!
* went to read the old version*
Welp better go save his sister. I hope the giant pillbug can help you because I don’t think you’ve got much of a chance solo.
Paveline could beat up ANYBODY
“6 pages of chapter 2 to sit through”
hehe, you’re making it sound like a chore x)
Keep up the great work!
Ha ha, what can I say.
Actually you guys should enjoy these 6 pages because Paveline wont show up for a while in chapter 3. I will miss her.
Seeing characters die is always so sad..