Yay! We have arrived at the first new page with the new inks! I’ve done five so far and I’ve gotta say, I like it way better. It’s much faster, more fun, and if you ask me, looks better.
Also, I’m home for the week at my parents house! Woop! Should be a good time but I’ll have limited computer access. Which is ok. I got a bunch of pages done ahead of time so updates will continue as usual.
This is my last update before Christmas so, Merry Christmas! Happy Holidays! Ho ho ho!
Sadly, there will be no Christmas themes Para-Ten page.
The last panel… Damn. You got me there. This was the most emotional panel ever IMO.
The black panel, the way he writes.. damnDAMN! T_T
I especially like how you handled the transition from jealous irritation through unsurety into clear admiration, all within a single page. Your characterisation is wonderful.
But damn you all the same for a cliffhanger like that. *grips chair*
By the way, we are your spelling nazis: weather/whether error in the sixth panel. Merry Christmas to you! 8D
Aw man, thanks so a lot! It’s great to hear, because this was one of the hardest parts to write. Characterizing so much, in so little time, was difficult. Ha ha.
Also, fixed the spelling!
In panel 6, the correct spelling for the context is “whether.” You spelled it like, rain or shine.
Your digital inking is very nice, but traditional really adds contrast and crispness to the images. I understand scanning can be a pain though. I only get around to scanning my own stuff like, once every two months or so x)
Merry christmas to you too!
Thanks! =D Yeah man, scanning these hasn’t been too bad though. The reason it was so hard before [on the first five pages of Ch. 1] is because I did them on large comic board paper, and had to scan the pages in parts. Piecing them together was hard, and the scale was never right. Ha ha. But these have all worked perfectly and I’m super pumped.
ooooh, intense. cliffhangery.
I sense some heavy stuff coming.
I can take it! BRING IT ON!
-Akhana is dead.
-A rabid dog ate my spoon collection.
-Akhana is dead.
Did I guess it? Did I guess it? >w>
NOPE. Ha ha ha
Merry Christmas Para-Ten
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I’m confused… he was 9 when they found Akhana, so how can he be 14 on the 3rd anniversary of her appearance?
Good question, I must have misread my script. I’ll look it over
Time in Para-Ten is mysterious
It would have been 5 years since they found her – he was 9 when they did and he’s 14 when he says that.