The last panel is so simple, but for some reason I like it. Ha ha.
Moved into a new apartment yesterday! The walls all need to be repainted and some plugs updated but the layout itself is pretty sweet, and we’re in a better part of town. Hurray! We’re still kind of “moving in”, unpacking and such, though. It’s hard to fully organize when we’re waiting for walls to be repainted.
I didn’t think we were gonna have internet so quickly, but it seems we do. WOOP.
Also I got a Yamaha Clavinova! For 350 dollars! Woooooooop.
your style is lovely! and i love that little monster/spirit/thingy
and the last panel might be kind of simple, but sometimes less is more!
keep up the good work
she looks fierce in the last panel.
Wow, that’s a steal for the keys. I’m diggin’ the dark colours for this scene. Good luck with the rest of move-in, they can be a pain sometimes.
Good job on the new comic!!
and good luck painting those walls
Oh yay!! I like the last panel too ^^
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blahglashgiuahwg why are you so good. At least tell me it takes you a million billion years to make every page, then I’ll feel better.
Ha ha ha, I wish I could.
I do spend a lot of time before each chapter thumb-nailing and planning compositions though. maybe that’ll make you feel better? Ha ha. So I’m not starting from scratch each page. It really speeds up the process.
It always impresses me, because his comic always looks kinda like a painting, yet it is all made in Photoshop. Congratulations on the new apartment! ^-^ If you could only use your mad Photoshop skills to paint your wall, you would be set.
Ha ha, I actually said the same thing. “If only I could make a selection and then do a paint bucket fill.”
I hate to be a crapper, ’cause you know I’m a massive fan, but this page doesn’t work for me at all. I gather she’s supposed to be hiding in the first two panels, but it looks like she’s just going to sleep. There is no terror in her demeanor at all. It would have been nice to have her looking terrified, pulling the blanket over her, the creature coming up to her blanket & sniffing around, making her look even MORE scared, and then moving on. Then, new page would be her deciding she wasn’t going to be a coward.
But, hey, that’s just my 2 cents, which ain’t worth much.
That’s true, although I was trying to make it look like she was going back to sleep. It probably would have benefited from being split up into more pages.
Also the monster isn’t supposed to really notice Paveline, ha ha. So in a sense it’s not her who’s in danger, although I guess she wouldn’t know that.
So she sees this creature that kills people & has already tried to kill her come into the room she’s in (at night, no less), and she just lays down to go to sleep? To be honest, that is how I initially interpreted the page, but I assumed I was mis-reading it, because I’d think she’s at least scream or run to wake the person who saved her previously, not lay down and try to go to sleep.
Well, everyone reacts differently. Not everyone is going to instantly run and put themselves in danger even if it’s the right thing to do. Not at first anyways. If Paveline was just instantly brave, with no effort or trial, it wouldn’t mean as much.
I think any kid would sooner hide themselves from danger and hope it passes than try to destroy it. Paveline isn’t quote a kid but she’s never had to deal with something like this before. Also she’s not a screamer. ha ha.
Oh wow, when you put it like that, I can kinda see it. I had thought those first two panels were her being asleep while rolling around and talking in her sleep. If you look at it like that, her face kinda fits, cause she is having a nightmare and wakes up eyes wide and screaming.