Comments on: Chapter 1, Page 06 http://www.tenthousandmasks.org/para-ten/?p=46 A comic about a girl trying to find her way. Tue, 07 Sep 2010 11:31:59 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8 hourly 1 By: rin_uzuki http://www.tenthousandmasks.org/para-ten/?p=46&cpage=1#comment-661 rin_uzuki Wed, 30 Dec 2009 10:18:53 +0000 http://www.tenthousandmasks.org/para-ten/?p=46#comment-661 Ah, are we spotting typos? (Oh no! Typo-spotter mode has been switched on...!! Too many years of scanslating! Nooo!) Ah, I think "dear, come here!" would be better, flow-wise. "Dear come here" sounds kind of tumbled together and weird. I really like the way this page is set up. Makes me think of a conversation in a videogame or something. =w= Ah, are we spotting typos? (Oh no! Typo-spotter mode has been switched on…!! Too many years of scanslating! Nooo!) Ah, I think “dear, come here!” would be better, flow-wise. “Dear come here” sounds kind of tumbled together and weird.

I really like the way this page is set up. Makes me think of a conversation in a videogame or something. =w=

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